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Suppose the career services center of your university is collecting suggestions from students.Write a letter to the person in charge to express your thanks for the services,and make suggestions.You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET Do not u

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Suppose the career services center of your university is collecting suggestions from students.Write a letter to the person in charge to express your thanks for the services,and make suggestions.You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET Do not use your own name.Use"Li Ming"instead.Do not write your address.

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答案：
解析：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to appreciate the career services you have been providing to us.They are so timely and efficient that we have benefited a lot.Thank you for your dedication.I am glad to know that you are collecting suggestions from students and would like to make some suggestions.Firstly,except for the employment information you have been offering all the time,wonder if you could offer more diverse vocational guidance,such as providing assistance with resume writing and the interview process.Secondly,I believe mock interviews would be of great help for students,during which employers or human resources directors could be invited to conduct interviews and give advice to those students who participate in.I hope you will find the above suggestions useful.Your attention to my suggestions would be highly appreciated.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
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第1题：

Directions:

You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there. Write him a letter to

1) make an apology, and

2) suggest a solution.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.

Do not write the address. (10 points)


正确答案：

Dear Bob,
　　I am writing to express my apology to you.
　　Several days ago, I borrowed your music CD when I lived in your house. Unfortunately, after I came back from Canada, I found it in my luggage. I was in such a hurry that I forgot to return it to you. I will send it to you by post or express as soon as possible. If necessary, I will compensate for any troubles it may cause.
　　Once again, I feel so sorry for any inconvenience caused. Please accept my apologies.

Sincerely yours,
Li Ming

第2题：

Suppose you have found something wrong with the electronic dictionary that you bought from an online store the other day, Write an email to the customer service center to

1) Make a complaint and

2) Demand a prompt solution

You should write about 100words on ANSERE SHEET 2

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter, Use "zhang wei "instead.


正确答案：
Dear Sir or Madame,
　　 As one of the regular customers of your online store, I am writing this letter to express my complaint against the flaws in your product—an electronic dictionary I bought in your shop the other day.
　　 The dictionary is supposed to be a favorable tool for my study. Unfortunately, I found that there are several problems. To begin with, when I opened it, I detected that the appearance of it had been scratched. Secondly, I did not find the battery promised in the advertisement posted on the homepage of your shop, which makes me feel that you have not kept your promise. What is worse, some of the keys on the keyboard do not work.
　　 I strongly request that a satisfactory explanation be given and effective measures should be taken to improve your service and the quality of your products. You can either send a new one to me or refund me my money in full.
　　 I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
　　 Sincerely yours,
　　 Zhang Wei

第3题：

Part A Directions:

On your way from Beijing to Paris, you lost you luggage carried by the airline. Write a complaint letter to the service center of the Airline. In your letter, you should tell them

1) what happened to your luggage,

2) what your luggage is like,

3) what compensation you expect.

You should write about 100 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name. Use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)


正确答案：

二、      参考范文

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing because I need to complain to you about what happened to my luggage carried by your airlines. On Friday, June 2, 2006, I traveled on your airlines from Beijing to Paris.  When I went to pick up my luggage in Paris, I was informed that it was missing. The lost luggage is a black suitcase, 50 cm in length and 30 cm in width, in which there are five volumes of valuable research papers. If they cannot be found for me, I am sure that you will agree to pay me ￥1000, the estimated worth of my luggage on my claim ticket, to compensate for my great loss.

I have always enjoyed the good service of your airlines, and I look forward to receiving the same kind of good service in this matter.

Sincerely

Li Ming

第4题：

Directions:Suppose you are a librarian in your university.Write a notice of about 100 words,providing the newly-enrolled international students with relevant information about the library.You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.Do not sign your own name at the end of the notice.Use“LI Ming”instead.Do not write the address.


答案：
解析：
Notice For better serving the international students,a notice is released here to provide the necessary information about the library.The university library opens at 8 a.m.and closes at 10 p.m.from Monday to Friday,but from 9 a.m.to 9 p.m.on

第5题：

Part A

51. Directions:

You are preparing to ask for some help from your teacher, write a letter that:

1) detail what you want him or she does for you,

2) express your thanks to your teacher,

You should write about i00 words on ANSWER SHEET II. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. You do not need to write the address.


正确答案：
 [参考范文]
Dear Ms Wang,
    I make bold to write this letter to ask you to do me a favor. I have tried to translate several short Chinese stories into English for a part-time job. As it is the first time for me to do a translation work, I think there must be many errors and awkward expressions of Chinese English for my lack of experiences. I sincerely hope that you would read over my manuscripts and correct my mistakes and socialisms. Also could you please give me some other suggestions on my translation work.
    Thank you for your help with great respect!
Your faithful student,
×××

第6题：

Directions：Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.

Do not write the address. （10 points）


正确答案：

January 20th, 2007

Dear Sir or Madam,
　　I’m a student in the university and a loyal reader of this library. I’m writing to tell some of my ideas, which I hope to be helpful for you.
　　I notice that many magazines in our library are out of date. It would be beneficial to us students if they could be updated in time. And I suggest introducing some new journals so as to bring new fresh air to the library. Furthermore, since we have a huge number of books, it is not easy to find the right one easily. However, if we can introduce some new searching means, such as implementing new information management system that would be useful.
　　Thank you for taking time reading this letter and I’m looking forward to seeing some new changes soon.

Sincerely Yours,
Li Ming

第7题：

Part A

51. Directions:

Your are asked to write a recommendation for a student. Please give your suggestions and express your opinions clearly a bout 100 words on ANSWER SHEET II. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. (10 points)


正确答案：
参考范文
To Professor Zhang,
    I have the pleasure of writing this letter of recommendation for Mr. Liu Shangshu, who is a student of mine. He wishes to be considered an applicant for the MS course of biology at your college.
    Liu Shangshu is a gifted young man. He has devoted his heart to his study and research. Not only has he obtained A' s in all major subject areas, but he has also published several articles in the school journal, illustrating his originality and his deep understanding of science. For his competence, he is respected by everyone who knows him.
    I feel sure that, if he is accepted by your college, he will be able to develop his talent to its fullest potential.  I sincerely hope you will give him favorable consideration.
                                                  Yours cordially,
                                                            x x x

第8题：

Part A

51. Directions：

Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.

Do not write the address. （10 points）


正确答案：

January 20th, 2007

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m a student in the university and a loyal reader of this library. I’m writing to tell some of my ideas, which I hope to be helpful for you.

I notice that many magazines in our library are out of date. It would be beneficial to us students if they could be updated in time. And I suggest introducing some new journals so as to bring new fresh air to the library. Furthermore, since we have a huge number of books, it is not easy to find the right one easily. However, if we can introduce some new searching means, such as implementing new information management system that would be useful.

Thank you for taking time reading this letter and I’m looking forward to seeing some new changes soon.

Sincerely Yours,

Li Ming

第9题：

Suppose your school is going to hold the Chinese Competition for International Students next month,Write for the StudentsJ Union a notice of about 100 words,providing relevant information about the competition.You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use"Students'Union"insteacl.Do not write the address.（10 points）


答案：
解析：
Notice To kindle rnternational stuclents'passion in learning Chinese Ianguage and culture,and select candidates for CCTV Chinese Proficiency Competition,our school has planned to hold the Chinese Competition for International Students from November 19th t0 24th.Open to all foreign students,this competition will have preliminary and final rounds.Both rounds include talent shows,knowledge contests of Chinese culture,and Chinese debates.Five contestants will respectively win the first,second and third prizes in the final on November 24th.The prize winners are entitled to compete for a seat in the national competition.All international students are welcome to join.Participants should download and fill an application form,and send it to Chinesecompetition@xxx.edu.cn before October 19"'.Students'Union

第10题：

Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university,suggesting how to improve students’physical condition.You should include the details you think necessary.You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use“Li Ming”instead.


答案：
解析：
审题谋篇本篇应用文仍然属于书信类型中的建议信，从话题角度看属于健康类话题。该书信的收信人为大学校长，所以属于正式文体，文中不应出现过多缩写/省略/口语表达等非正式语言。称呼处可以直接尊称“Dear Mr.President,”，正文仍然按照三段模式展开。首段需要简单地自我介绍，交代写信目的。中间段具体对如何提高大学生身体素质给出2-3条可行的建议。建议信的尾段一般是提出希望，期待回信。落款使用常见的书信落款：Yours sincerely,Sincerely yours，Yours truly，或Truly yours等，签名应写Li Ming，切勿出现自己真实姓名。二、参考范文Dear Mr.President,I am a student of our university.I am writing this letter to bring forward some effective suggestions to our college students about how to improve their body health.Initially,exercising,though not a student’s first priority in his/her daily life,should be stressed by all of us as well as our university,because it is vital to not only our physical health but mental health as well.Furthermore,developing a regular and healthy diet,which provides vitamins and other nutrients to our body,would,to some extent,undoubtedly benefit our body.I hope that you will find my suggestions useful and propagandas be launched among the students.I am looking forward to your earlier response.Yours sincerely,Li Ming三、万能句型1.I am writing this letter to bring forward some effective suggestions to…about….2.…should be stressed by…,because it is vital to but…as well.3.I hope that you will find my suggestions useful.4.I am looking forward to your earlier response.

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